The visuals for the tree are nice Tori! I like the colors for the leaves and the tree trunk.
What is a bothering to me is the color scheme for the composition. I can barely see the logo on the left due to the strong background color (it's getting drowned). I would either lighten the background color so the logo is more visibly, or change the logo colors so that it's more readable and viewable.
I would say the same for the leaves. The leaves opacity could be a tint lighter so that the strong blue of the butterfly can remain strong. Instead of fighting against strong green shades. Also, you don't need two logos in the composition. To have one on the left and the right is too much. One's enough.
With that said, you could make the logo on the left white, and then place it together with the website link...and move the address along with the website link and the logo. Placement and arrangement is key.
The stroke for the "m" doesn't really make sense to me. Is there a reason? If so, ok. If not, I don't really believe it's needed.
Lastly, I think you don't need the gradient for the sun, that's the only one that has it in the design, and it's not really doin' anything but grabbin' more attention than need be. I believe.
It's lookin' good Tori, just continue to push my friend. :) Talk to you soon, and good luck in the upcoming Portfolio Review! :)
The visuals for the tree are nice Tori! I like the colors for the leaves and the tree trunk.
ReplyDeleteWhat is a bothering to me is the color scheme for the composition. I can barely see the logo on the left due to the strong background color (it's getting drowned). I would either lighten the background color so the logo is more visibly, or change the logo colors so that it's more readable and viewable.
I would say the same for the leaves. The leaves opacity could be a tint lighter so that the strong blue of the butterfly can remain strong. Instead of fighting against strong green shades. Also, you don't need two logos in the composition. To have one on the left and the right is too much. One's enough.
With that said, you could make the logo on the left white, and then place it together with the website link...and move the address along with the website link and the logo. Placement and arrangement is key.
The stroke for the "m" doesn't really make sense to me. Is there a reason? If so, ok. If not, I don't really believe it's needed.
Lastly, I think you don't need the gradient for the sun, that's the only one that has it in the design, and it's not really doin' anything but grabbin' more attention than need be. I believe.
It's lookin' good Tori, just continue to push my friend. :) Talk to you soon, and good luck in the upcoming Portfolio Review! :)